What have you learned

from your audience feedback?

When we put up our short film on youtube and also got some of our classmates to view it we found that a regular comment we got was the fact that we hadn't made it clear were the story changed from present to past. This was a problem we adressed before the final showing of the project, we changed it by entering in some text detailing the time and what point of the day it was e.g. '10:32 later that day'. we have learnt that even though we may know what is going on in the story and how we want it to look but we need to look at it from an audience point of view and question ourselves whether or not the part, effect, shot etc. makes sense and if not make sure that it is changed to make it clearer.